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		<title>Comment on Can anyone recommend an estate planning lawyer in san mateo, ca? by Wedding Venues Sydney</title>
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		<title>Comment on I am bored and feel like writing, will someone help me? by Cycling Gloves</title>
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I like going to ifmurdered and checking the new posts when I&#039;m bored. If you wanna write, add a submission to the site.</description>
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<p>I like going to ifmurdered and checking the new posts when I&#8217;m bored. If you wanna write, add a submission to the site.</p>
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		<title>Comment on I am bored and feel like writing, will someone help me? by News Online</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2010 13:13:52 +0000</pubDate>
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There are thousands of ways to write a story.

Choose your topic.  Plot it out. choose the genre and tone.  Then do everything you can creatively to explain it.  

I think the best stories spring from truth.  Choose a situation.  Like yesterday a man came up to me and asked me for help.  

Plot line

-go to the store to buy some smokes
-have one outside
-a car pulls up with a guy inside
-guy grabs attention, tells me to come over to the car
-only speaks Italian, has no money, needs help
-shows me Armani jacket samples 
-needs 85 dollars to change flight to tonight, blew all his money drunk at blackjack tables
- no cash on me, apologize
-he cries
-wish him good luck

Then you creatively write around the plot line.  Add fiction and paint a mood.  Try to draw in other readers.

&quot;I was out of cigarettes and that always made me nervous.  Knowing I was out is something that gave me anxiety having smoked for 10 years now, I know other smokers can relate.&quot;
-go to the store to buy some smokes

&quot;I was halfway through my cigarette, finally relaxed and content when a red SUV pulled up into a parking space.  I didn&#039;t want to make eye contact with the driver, I hate making eye-contact with people because it always invited conversation.&quot;
-a car pulls up with a guy inside


and so on an so forth.  


Remember to include a lot of thought.  Stories are usually bland and more like poetry when the protagonist doesn&#039;t think and just does.  It&#039;s good to know what&#039;s going on inside someones head.  It also makes it more interesting when you have characters think during dialouge.  Be perceptive and think of what your character would notice in that situation.  For example my character would be aware of how fast his cigarette is burning.  How sweaty the guy was.  The spit collecting on the italian&#039;s his lips.  The gum stuck on the pavement.   It gives depth and humanity to characters which readers can relate to.  

Have fun with it.</description>
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<p>There are thousands of ways to write a story.</p>
<p>Choose your topic.  Plot it out. choose the genre and tone.  Then do everything you can creatively to explain it.  </p>
<p>I think the best stories spring from truth.  Choose a situation.  Like yesterday a man came up to me and asked me for help.  </p>
<p>Plot line</p>
<p>-go to the store to buy some smokes<br />
-have one outside<br />
-a car pulls up with a guy inside<br />
-guy grabs attention, tells me to come over to the car<br />
-only speaks Italian, has no money, needs help<br />
-shows me Armani jacket samples<br />
-needs 85 dollars to change flight to tonight, blew all his money drunk at blackjack tables<br />
- no cash on me, apologize<br />
-he cries<br />
-wish him good luck</p>
<p>Then you creatively write around the plot line.  Add fiction and paint a mood.  Try to draw in other readers.</p>
<p>&#8220;I was out of cigarettes and that always made me nervous.  Knowing I was out is something that gave me anxiety having smoked for 10 years now, I know other smokers can relate.&#8221;<br />
-go to the store to buy some smokes</p>
<p>&#8220;I was halfway through my cigarette, finally relaxed and content when a red SUV pulled up into a parking space.  I didn&#8217;t want to make eye contact with the driver, I hate making eye-contact with people because it always invited conversation.&#8221;<br />
-a car pulls up with a guy inside</p>
<p>and so on an so forth.  </p>
<p>Remember to include a lot of thought.  Stories are usually bland and more like poetry when the protagonist doesn&#8217;t think and just does.  It&#8217;s good to know what&#8217;s going on inside someones head.  It also makes it more interesting when you have characters think during dialouge.  Be perceptive and think of what your character would notice in that situation.  For example my character would be aware of how fast his cigarette is burning.  How sweaty the guy was.  The spit collecting on the italian&#8217;s his lips.  The gum stuck on the pavement.   It gives depth and humanity to characters which readers can relate to.  </p>
<p>Have fun with it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on I am bored and feel like writing, will someone help me? by Panic Anxiety Attack</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 22 May 2010 11:33:56 +0000</pubDate>
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Take a easy book to read with average pages, like say Charlie and the Chocolate Factory by Roald Dahl, first read the book then close your eyes and flipped through all the pages and when you&#039;re satisfied stop. Read the page where you stopped and then you continue from there. Write how the story will unfold in YOUR imagination. It&#039;s pretty fun and who knows, maybe after countless of reading and writing, you can find the inspiration to write your original story. Good luck!</description>
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<p>Take a easy book to read with average pages, like say Charlie and the Chocolate Factory by Roald Dahl, first read the book then close your eyes and flipped through all the pages and when you&#8217;re satisfied stop. Read the page where you stopped and then you continue from there. Write how the story will unfold in YOUR imagination. It&#8217;s pretty fun and who knows, maybe after countless of reading and writing, you can find the inspiration to write your original story. Good luck!</p>
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		<title>Comment on I am bored and feel like writing, will someone help me? by Stop Panic Attacks</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 20 May 2010 05:55:48 +0000</pubDate>
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write something about someones life (made up)</description>
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<p>write something about someones life (made up)</p>
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		<title>Comment on I am bored and feel like writing, will someone help me? by Binaural Beats</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 17 May 2010 11:55:59 +0000</pubDate>
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i like drawing...so i make comic books...u could do that...u write and draw...which is pretty fun</description>
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<p>i like drawing&#8230;so i make comic books&#8230;u could do that&#8230;u write and draw&#8230;which is pretty fun</p>
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		<title>Comment on If I have a black shirt and use an iron on transfer with black writing, will the words be white or gray? by Wedding Venues Melbourne</title>
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white i did that before with really cheap lettering and it was still white alothough it came out in a faded way because i took it off too early but yeah it will def be very white just make sure to keep the iron on high and long enough specs of black might possibly show thru too</description>
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<p>white i did that before with really cheap lettering and it was still white alothough it came out in a faded way because i took it off too early but yeah it will def be very white just make sure to keep the iron on high and long enough specs of black might possibly show thru too</p>
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it won&#039;t show up very well</description>
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<p>it won&#8217;t show up very well</p>
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		<title>Comment on Financial Planning versus Estate Planning, which is the higher priority? by Hormone Deficiency</title>
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All the financial planning in the world isn&#039;t going to be worth squat if you don&#039;t have the legal power to protect it.   
You need a will, living will, power of attorney etc.  If you are seriously hurt in a automobile accident and are not able to communicate, your spouse has very few choices without the power of attorney and the living will.  You may end up as a &quot;turnip&quot; in a nursing home spending all that money you have worked to save, just to care for you.
Or, if you and your spouse somehow are both killed, what will happen to the child?  Think about your family and your spouses family and image that there could be conflicts over who should be in charge, and who will control the finances.  Who will be the legal guardians?  Who will help your child decide what happens to all the money you have amassed?  Who will control that child&#039;s future?  Without a will, living will, and power of attorney, there will be problems.
Take care of this planning. Once this is done, then continue your progress on financial planning.</description>
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<p>All the financial planning in the world isn&#8217;t going to be worth squat if you don&#8217;t have the legal power to protect it.<br />
You need a will, living will, power of attorney etc.  If you are seriously hurt in a automobile accident and are not able to communicate, your spouse has very few choices without the power of attorney and the living will.  You may end up as a &#8220;turnip&#8221; in a nursing home spending all that money you have worked to save, just to care for you.<br />
Or, if you and your spouse somehow are both killed, what will happen to the child?  Think about your family and your spouses family and image that there could be conflicts over who should be in charge, and who will control the finances.  Who will be the legal guardians?  Who will help your child decide what happens to all the money you have amassed?  Who will control that child&#8217;s future?  Without a will, living will, and power of attorney, there will be problems.<br />
Take care of this planning. Once this is done, then continue your progress on financial planning.</p>
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I know this sounds rude--never sign a power of attorney.... you absolutely have  no control as to what these persons will do to your investments (cash)---OOKK...  I have 2 friends that signed a POA --- one lost $50G the other $100G...  Done very legal-- every time they make a stock trade they get a commission... Buy and take a commission -- stock goes down they save your investment by selling and take a commision...They do not have to tell you until your out of money---OK

Listen to me---a few hours of thinking, Phone calls and educating your self and you are your best financial advisor.  Paying debt is part of financial planning -- Long term debt is of course you home... If you do not own a home there is no estate planning except 401k-- Roth IRA -- and cash... Insurance Whole Life is a very poor investment 1-2% interest-- read the policy.-- insurance is always an expense...  Term iinsurance is good and is cheap with no return...incase you die..... 
You need to pull your head out of the sand and learn how to manage the money that is for saving...  Untill you learn how--Suggest the cash money be collected in a bank saving account...  Why??? Your are gona be very unhappy if you get ripped off--Legally....  ??? I didn&#039;t know -- is what they all say???   These brokers don&#039;t wear Gucci -- $1000 suits-- and just bought the wife a new Mercedes... paid for by brokerage fees...  Anything the broker sells you he is gona get a fee... You will never here him say anything about NO-Load mutual funds....No Commission...  Another line---to embarrass you--- No Loads Ha Ha you get what ya pay for... Indication they are no good....  
Ya need a will-- Look in the phone book and pick the attorney closes to you home--OK  . Virgina law on wills like all states is accomplished very easily -- by law...
Everyone is concerned about finances --a great deal of concern is not necessary...  Like I said you are your best financial advisor---Now my fee for advising you is $0.00
Have a good life.....  The best advise is free....</description>
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<p>I know this sounds rude&#8211;never sign a power of attorney&#8230;. you absolutely have  no control as to what these persons will do to your investments (cash)&#8212;OOKK&#8230;  I have 2 friends that signed a POA &#8212; one lost $50G the other $100G&#8230;  Done very legal&#8211; every time they make a stock trade they get a commission&#8230; Buy and take a commission &#8212; stock goes down they save your investment by selling and take a commision&#8230;They do not have to tell you until your out of money&#8212;OK</p>
<p>Listen to me&#8212;a few hours of thinking, Phone calls and educating your self and you are your best financial advisor.  Paying debt is part of financial planning &#8212; Long term debt is of course you home&#8230; If you do not own a home there is no estate planning except 401k&#8211; Roth IRA &#8212; and cash&#8230; Insurance Whole Life is a very poor investment 1-2% interest&#8211; read the policy.&#8211; insurance is always an expense&#8230;  Term iinsurance is good and is cheap with no return&#8230;incase you die&#8230;..<br />
You need to pull your head out of the sand and learn how to manage the money that is for saving&#8230;  Untill you learn how&#8211;Suggest the cash money be collected in a bank saving account&#8230;  Why??? Your are gona be very unhappy if you get ripped off&#8211;Legally&#8230;.  ??? I didn&#8217;t know &#8212; is what they all say???   These brokers don&#8217;t wear Gucci &#8212; $1000 suits&#8211; and just bought the wife a new Mercedes&#8230; paid for by brokerage fees&#8230;  Anything the broker sells you he is gona get a fee&#8230; You will never here him say anything about NO-Load mutual funds&#8230;.No Commission&#8230;  Another line&#8212;to embarrass you&#8212; No Loads Ha Ha you get what ya pay for&#8230; Indication they are no good&#8230;.<br />
Ya need a will&#8211; Look in the phone book and pick the attorney closes to you home&#8211;OK  . Virgina law on wills like all states is accomplished very easily &#8212; by law&#8230;<br />
Everyone is concerned about finances &#8211;a great deal of concern is not necessary&#8230;  Like I said you are your best financial advisor&#8212;Now my fee for advising you is $0.00<br />
Have a good life&#8230;..  The best advise is free&#8230;.</p>
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